Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Themes in "The Patriot" and "Just Jane"



Author's Note: This is an essay comparing the themes of The Patriot and Just Jane. I originally wrote it for social studies although, I realized it can also be scored on the writing/reading rubric.

What if you lived in the Revolutionary War? Would you long to gain knowledge of the war, and its soldiers, or remain a naïve citizen? How would you treat your children? Would you follow the themes of The Patriot or Just Jane? The main similarity, in The Patriot and Just Jane, in theme, is, “becoming aware”. However a difference in themes, includes: “trusting children” versus “over-protective guardians.”

When Benjamin Martin, the main character in The Patriot, thought he was aware of The War, and it’s soldiers, he was asked if he was a Patriot.  He responded, “If you mean by patriot, am I angry about taxation without representation, well, yes I am”. Yet he still believed war should not be an option for the colonies. Although, once Gabriel, his eldest son, briefly returned from The War he learned more of the British Army. He learned that they fought unfairly. He learned what they truly fought for was worse than it had seemed. He became aware of what The War truly was, and that he was deeply needed. (Emmerich)
Jane Prentice, the main character in Just Jane, moved from England to live with her Uncle Robert, a true loyalist. She was surprised when her uncle’s travels forced her to live with her other relatives, who were patriots. Being new to the colonies, Jane quickly learned about both sides, and their specific beliefs.  She learned of her Uncle Hugh’s patriot thoughts, and her Uncle Robert’s, loyalist thoughts. She listened to others. She learned of the conflicts. She developed her own opinion after truly becoming aware of The War. (Lavender)

 Benjamin Martin, the widowed father of seven, truly cared for his children yet he had always been unsure of what to allow his children to do. He never wanted his two eldest sons to join the Continental Army, but later allowed Gabriel to enlist. This leads to Thomas, his second eldest son’s, death. This gave Benjamin a change of mind causing him to make his younger son shoot a marching group of “red-coats”. But I guess once someone dies, you learn that you cannot shelter your children forever. Therefore Benjamin began to trust his children. (Emmerich)
Jane Prentice’s Uncle Robert and Aunt Clarissa, loved Jane yet never gave her freedom. She could not go where she please. And she could not, publically, believe what she believed. So when Jane developed her own opinion, her curiosity grew and she was put in the position to sneak away to see her Uncle Hugh. Although, this gave her Uncle and Aunt a reason not to trust her, they still wished to shelter her from what truly was occurring in the war, and in their family. They over-protected her, only wanting her to think loyalist thoughts. They did trust her. However, they did not want her exposed. (Lavender)

                The Patriot and Just Jane share an important theme, along with themes that are not so similar. However, each taking place in the Revolutionary War every character gains different perspectives, due to their different experiences. Theme is decieded from characters. Theme is developed from setting. Theme is developed by perspective.

Bibliography

Lavender, William. Just Jane. Gulliver Books Harcourt, 2002.
The Patriot. Dir. Roland Dr. Emmerich. 2000.

Theme of Lies and Deciet

Author's Note: This is a theme analysis on New Moon by Stephanie Meyer. 

Nobody in the world is 100% truthful. Not with themselves,  and certainly not with others. We deceive our minds. We begin believing our lies, and other's lies, turning life into a game of deceit and confusion. In New Moon by Stephanie Meyer, we find that Bella and Edward are playing this unfortunate game. Edward deceives himself, along with Bella, leaving Bella to lie to almost everyone left in her life. With all of this said, one of the main themes in New Moon is deceit/lies.
               
                Edward deceives himself, along with Bella.

                Edward wanted Bella in his life. Yet he convinced himself that she would be better off without him. He said to her, “My world is not for you”, making her believe he truly doesn’t want her, that he definitely has no soul. At first Bella finds it difficult to believe this, but as soon as he left her stranded in the forest it all fell into place, she realized he had dug a hole through her, leaving her to suffer in depression . Edward always claims he is too dangerous for Bella, making him think that she’s better off without him. He knows she’ll be devastated. Yet he deceives himself saying that “humans move on”. But even when Bella tried to move on, she found more lies and deceit.

                Bella deceives, well, everyone.
               
Bella was deceived, causing “a hole through her heart”, that grew deeper and deeper. But at the beginning of a dig is always overlooked because no one knows the cause. In the beginning of her depression, after Edward left, she began to shut out her close friends, and even her dad. Then Jacob was there. Bella used him. And she knew it because she thought to herself, “I was so wrong to encourage Jacob” as she made him believe she may finally like him more. And he was unaware of have deceitful Bella could be in such a depressive state.

                New Moon teaches us—

“If you cannot tell the truth about yourself, you cannot tell it about other people”

               

Thursday, December 13, 2012

We Are Admirable


  Author's Note: This is my essay on Hester Prynne from The Scarlet Letter. Spoiler Alert: In this essay I mention who the "baby-daddy" is!      

      Imagine that you live in a Puritan Society, waiting for your husband to return, yet you remain young and beautiful. You have always been a good citizen, followed the rules set by God. And your reverend. You live a perfect Puritan life. Then, you commit a sin, you fall short of the expectations set for you to live by. Now you, and your child, are outcasts: underneath the shadow of your fellow adulterer, Reverend Dimmesdale.  He begs, and begs, for you to admit it was he, who had helped her commit this sin, but you refuse.  This is your punishment, and although the circumstances prove otherwise, you are an admirable person.

Imagine you are Hester Prynne, in Nathaniel Hawthorne's, The Scarlet Letter.

           Hester Prynne is an admirable woman. She is generous. She is bold. And most importantly she is a good single-mother. Hester is been all of these things, even seven years after the first time she wore the scarlet 'A' publically. Although, she is ridiculed constantly, she chose to stay near the town she had known for so long, but on the out-skirts of coarse. It was familiar to her, one of the only things left near her that couldn’t "ruin" her life.

           And because she had struggled in society herself, Hester sewed clothes for the poor. Being a fantastic seamstress, it was truly an act of kindness, especially sense she didn’t charge them. This was an act to repay her sins, with God and herself. It made her feel Godly. And like a good person again, until she remembered she bore a scarlet letter upon her breast.  The 'A' would never truly leave her. But the acts of citizenship masked the pain, the letter pressed. It lightened the load. It made her happy. It made her proud.

          Although Hester is proud of her donations, she isn't proud of the scarlet embroidery she must wear. Yet she continues to be bold, taking the ridicule, and speaking up when appropriate. As she walked from the prison door, she surely knew of what the gossips had said. Their stares burned into her cheeks, showing her embarrassment. Although, she walked quietly by them, not starting a dispute of any kind. On the other hand, when Governor Bellingham threaten to take Pearl, Hester's daughter, into the custody of another, Hester spoke of what the letter, and its shame, will teach her daughter and ends up keeping Pearl in her custody.

           Her fight for  Pearl proves that she is a strong single-mother. And that she allows Pearl to express her own opinion, whether out of fear or respect. Although, Hester had began to believe Pearl was of the Black Man (what Satan was referred to in the 17th century), she didn’t let that possibility change the affection she had for Pearl. Yet Pearl could be a pain. She always decorated the scarlet letter, and even kissed it at times. Even though, Hester repeatedly mentioned it was bad. Pearl wanted to know why, and like any child she wanted her way. But Hester knew better than to give her wildly-spoken child all of the information.


Go back to imagining you are Hester Prynne. An outcast. An adulteress. A generous yet bold woman. A strong mother. A role model. There is no need to imagine anymore. We are all Hester. We sin. We give. And we are admirable.

Thursday, November 15, 2012

Roots


Authors Note- This is a "mini-essay" about technology in the United States, and how much we crave it. This also includes some references to Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury- a genius author. Enjoy :)

Values in our country continue to worse, day by day, and year by year. New technology is the thing we most desire, we work for it. It buries itself deeper into our lives. Forming roots  deeper, needing more products to remain satisfied. Why do we work so hard, only to become weakened by our desperation? We are no longer focused on what used to be important? Books. Plays. Articles. Learning from life experiences.  Why have we gone so down hill? Why is technology so deeply rooted into our lives?

January 24, 1984: the date the Macintosh was released by Apple. This was the seed of our obsession. The thing that caused the roots to start to grow. This piece of technology replaced our writing notebooks, pencils, and pens. It made life easier, and inspired an era of new technology. If the Macintosh was not created- Apple would cease to exist, along with Dell.  Without these companies the U.S. would continue to research in books. Read them. Have more intelligent conversations. Things that are very difficult to do, when there are so many roots constricting you.

In Ray Bradbury's Fahrenheit 451, which takes place in a futuristic United States, technology continues to be rooted in to everyday life. However,  the strength of the roots has overtaken human intelligence, brainwashing them into thinking books are evil. Televisions are more craved than before as well. Each household aspires to have four walls of TVs. Without these symbols, they are considered poor- outdated. They neglect the books they once knew, as the roots continue take money putting it towards selfish and foolish goals.

Ray Bradbury predicted what is to come, and what has become. This book was published in 1953-- 31 years before the Macintosh planted itself into our lives. He saw the 1925 version of television. He saw it would become a problem. He knew roots must be weakened. He did not want the United States to become too reliant.

 Unfortunately, we now are reliant on televisions. Computers. iPods. Everything that is not important. Everything that Fahrenheit 451 predicted. If we do not learn from his, accurate descriptions of what is to come- the roots will be stronger, making it ever so difficult to break free. We are deeply rooted in to technology, and it will only worsen over time. 

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Pieces


A newly constructed house shines tall and proud, as its shadow covers its old, broken pieces. Pieces of all shapes and colors hide in the dark, fearing one would find them.  Then comes the light. It shines bright, and begins to see the ruins. Yet they still are not visible, causing them to be forgotten. The owner, has not forgotten though. The failures. The discouragement. The losses. The pieces are still there.

It had been a year since my father had died, and left me with my druggy of a mother.  He was the one who protected me. He was the one I told everything. He was the one who helped me through school. And he was dead. And no one knew why. The police had their suspicions: heart attack, brain dead, suicide. But nothing added up. After a while they were only left with one scenario -- murder. 

My mother had murdered my father. I was all alone. And this was the first piece of me to fall.

Naturally I was put into the care of my grandma. She lived in the hills of Orange County, a place which was all too expensive for my taste at the time. But it was better than nothing, or at least I thought. I ended up staying almost two years in OC, finishing my high school education . And every day I received more critics, but even more discouragement towards my aspiring writing career, and everything I did. I wasn't talented enough. I wasn’t dressed right.

I cut myself for the first time that year. And with every slit, another piece of myself fell.

After I graduated Fullteron Union High School, along with "esteemed classmates", I had a choice to make. College? Or begin working immediately? I wanted my writing career. I wanted it with a deep passion. So I applied to Hamilton, in New York. That was the school I had dreamt of going to, ever since I saw my dad's diploma. After weeks of waiting for a letter back, I received mine. My application had been rejected.

I was a failure. My father was great enough. I crushed my laptop, which contained all my writing. Another piece fell.

And another piece.

And another.

And another.

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Thank You, Founding Fathers


"Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise of thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press;  or the right of the people to peacefully assemble, and to petition the government for a redress of grievances."

The first amendment, in the Constitution, greatly affected the history and future of the United States. It's allowed amazing speeches, theories, opinions, and petitions to have been made. Without these events, our country would not be progressing, therefore, we thank our founding fathers for their gift of rights which we have received.

"Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise of thereof;". This statement gives us the gift of believing what we wish. This portion of the first amendment allowed George Smoot and John Mather to prove the Big Bang Theory. If this right were not in place, the scientific field would still remain oblivious.

"Or abridging the freedom of speech, of the press;".  We have the ability to say what we want. Whether it's broadcasting your voice to the population of America, or delivering a speech which helped drive unequal rights into the ground. Either way, this amendment let Martin Luther King Jr., to give his famous "I have a Dream Speech" to the public. Without this America, would still be oblivious to how they treated others, leaving the African American still an outcast.

"Or the right to peacefully assemble, and to petition the government for a redress of grievances." .  We have the right to disagree with the government, and society. Thankfully, women's rights groups were able to petition the government, and earn the right to vote. Without this right this, I would never have the chance to vote.

What can you thank our founding fathers for? For the first amendment, or maybe their intelligence? Whatever it may be, everything they have done has greatly affected the United States. Therefore, the founding fathers, have affected not only the famous speakers and our country, but you as well.

It All Results in Death

Author's Note- This is my cause/effect piece, to be scored on the reading rubric. I tried to compare (or bring in) another book, to get a more advanced score. In this short description, I talk about My Sister's Keeper, by Jodi Picoult and The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle, by Avi.


 Kate Fitzgerald was diagnosed with Leukemia at a very young age. And to make everything worse, Kate had such a rare blood marrow type, the chance of survival was even slimmer. But Sara and Brian, her parents made a very difficult choice, which would greatly effect their family. They had a child, with specially designed genes, to be Kate's donor. Ana is that child, and the middle kid of the Fitzgerald family. When she discovers this, she is outraged. And she decides to sue her parents. The lawsuit filed, is the climax of the story.  At this point in the plot, tensions build and nothing will ever be the same again in the Fitzgerald family.  Because when arguments become more intense, and emotions rise, people begin to be torn apart.

Brian and Sara begin to argue, even more so then before, due to the new fear of losing Kate. Even though, they love Anna, at first they both cannot see her point of view, which causes Anna to feel like an outcast. And when all the focus shifts to the lawsuit Jessie, the older brother, begins to act out, trying to get attention. His actions and words, along with Anna's lawsuit uncover a dreadful secret of Kate's: she wants to die, and she is fed up with all the medical treatments.

A book with a similar cause/effect is The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle. Although this book does not have anything to do with genetically formed babies, it faces the same effects as in My Sister's Keeper, since Charlotte has to deal with lawsuits caused by someone wanting to die. To sum it up, Charlotte is accused of murder. The crew forms against her, similar to Anna versus her parents, and it results in terrible lose.

And what does all of this lead too? Death.